The fantasy world turning into reality,
the feeling of true joviality.
Immersed in the colors of nature,
embraced in the lap of the Creator.
the scintillating rays were beyond VIBGYOR,
the heavenly beauty I never adored before.
The heartbeat stopped for a while,
the sound of ringing bells travelling from miles.
The twinkling stars wrapped me all around,
the ecstasy left me spellbound.
The moments shared so close with the Divinity,
made me feel HIS magnanimity.
The imaginary frames captured in the mind,
now, the real views turned me blind.
Adorned as bride, she waited every evening for her loved ones,
the eyes were dazzled on seeing her elegance.
The stunning beauty just stole my heart,
I can't close my eyes because of the fear to be apart.
The blissfulness was just WOW !
I am still wondering "How?"
Nice! I can feel it :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks Aboli...That's the huge compliment :)
DeletePhhoodiii..jhakaass ek dum
ReplyDeletenice work jubi :)
ReplyDeletetoo good jubad :).. awesome :)
ReplyDeleteWah ! Finally it rhymed. :D ... Just kidding ... Awesome poem ...
ReplyDeletehehe ...thanku :) I knew the first thing u will notice in my poem would be rythm :) btw, us time se lekar ab tak aur bhi kuch poems mein rythm aa gya :) u were right ...likhne se aata hai :) thanku :)
DeleteThank you so much Gaurav, Pankaj and Jassi :)
ReplyDeleteArey wah Jubi.. aap to kalakar nikle :D
ReplyDeleteThanks :) arey abhi kalakar kahan ... koshish kar rhi hun bas thoda likhne ki .. :)
Deletevery beautifully written..thank you for sharing...one can feel that you really conceived the moment...and i liked the way you moved from an external observer to being one with the moment....keep writing and keep sharing...
ReplyDeleteThank you Pandey ji :) motivated by you, I started posting and I hope this motivation continues forever. Great ! you observed this so precisely. I wanted to give another direction to the poem in the end but could not pen down that part...next poem awaits that feeling ...
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